We did a speech choir for this short story, and we scored 48/50 points, the highest score among all the groups (naks!) My professor said that the story is but a cliche, but the way it was written had striked a whole new different ambiance. (naks agen)
If I am to score my work, i'll give it 5/10.
I am not travestying, nor am I being humble, but I just find it too amateur. I have been reading lots of short story and I can say that I am but a toenail compared to all of it.
Okay, you got, I am really having a hard time pleasing myself in this field.
PS: Just in case you don't know what the title is going to, it is the three manifestations of love. Phileo for family, Eros for erotic/ romantic love, and Agape for true love.