Phileo, Eros and Agape (Short Story)

Our Academic Reading professor gave us an activity wherein I almost drooled out of happiness: obliging us to come up with our original story and think of an aesthetic way to present it in the class. I, as a very impulsive writer wannabe, took the driver seat for our group and wrote the story which they have formulated. And this is how my short story have gone:

We did a speech choir for this short story, and we scored 48/50 points, the highest score among all the groups (naks!) My professor said that the story is but a cliche, but the way it was written had striked a whole new different ambiance. (naks agen)

If I am to score my work, i'll give it 5/10.

I am not travestying, nor am I being humble, but I just find it too amateur. I have been reading lots of short story and I can say that I am but a toenail compared to all of it.

Okay, you got, I am really having a hard time pleasing myself in this field.

PS: Just in case you don't know what the title is going to, it is the three manifestations of love. Phileo for family, Eros for erotic/ romantic love, and Agape for true love.

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